McKinley Mall Murder (Criminal Behavior).
McKinley Mall Murder (Criminal Behavior)
Paper details https://www.wivb.com/news/local-news/erie-county/hamburg/woman-chased-murdered-inside-mckinley-mall-store/ https://buffalonews.com/2019/09/25/hamburg-police-investigate-fatal-stabbing-at-mckinley-mall/ https://buffalonews.com/2019/09/27/he-tried-to-stab-me-as-well-woman-says-mall-stabbing-suspect-threatened-her-too/ General Checklist for the Paper ***This document is NOT a substitute for the requirements outlined on the assignment sheet. ENSURE YOU RE-CHECK the assignment sheet before the submission of the assessment.*** Ensure your summary is thorough, well-organized and follows the requirements of the assignment. o Included in this summary is the city and state of the event, along with the full date (month, day and year). Ensure to thoroughly explain and support why you believe the criminal or deviant behavior occurred. Ensure the “impact” section is substantive and well-supported. Ensure the current event falls within the allotted timeline. Ensure you have included at LEAST three academic sources (Hint: Your textbook could be used as one source.). Ensure EVERYTHING is documented (i.e. in-text citations and bibliography). This includes the news coverage of the current event. o At minimum, your paper should have four sources in the bibliography (Three academic sources and the news publication that the current was retrieved from). Ensure all citations are in APA format. Ensure your paper is properly formatted. o See “Key Formatting Items for Papers” on the assignment sheet. Ensure academic integrity (plagiarism) has not been breached. Ensure your paper meets the threshold of good academic writing. o Similarly, revisit the section on the assignment sheet entitled “Writing Advice”, and review the “Common Writing Errors” document in BlackBoard. Ensure your paper is submitted via BlackBoard, in a timely manner. ***TO ENSURE YOU’VE COVERED ALL OF THE REQUIREMENTS, REVISIT THE ASSIGNMENT DOCUMENT AND RUBRIC. **** 1. Clearly stated purpose/main idea/thesis; 2. Adequate support/proof/development of the main idea(s); 3. Clear and logical organization; 4. Complete sentences and standard usage of grammar, punctuation and spelling; 5. Correct documentation (interior documentation, references and/or bibliography) in a format appropriate to the field; 6. Evidence of critical thinking. ******************************************************************************************** As discussed, there are issues with the paper. Below are comments that reflect your grade. I did, however, review it closer when grading, and there is enough of citations for me to provide a grade. Should you wish to resubmit, visit the Writing Center for their assistance. Writing: