We need work on the methodology chapter to be more Precise. *For the methodology you need to clearly explain what was done, how this was done and why this way. For example no discussion of inferential stats when conducting focus groups. *Under primary method we need you to discuss and justify the focus group approach. * Sampling simply needs to explain purposive sampling and no other sampling method., how this was applied for the section of respondents. *Prior to this, I want the philosophy and research description to be Precise. For example, if adopting intepretivism there is no need to explain the alternatives. Instead explain interpretivism and how this influences further methodological decisions especially primary method. Therefore the interpretivist position favours understanding from the point of view of the respondent, hence qualitative approaches. *Then i want you to help me develop an argument as to why focus groups as the qualitative method. Note: In summary, look at refining the methodology chapter and freeing up valuable words that can then be applied to the final two chapters. In the final chapter you need to compare the findings with the literature (compare chapters 2 and 4) in addressing your stated research issue from chapter 1. A useful question to ask is ‘how do the findings agree, with, differ and extend the literature regarding the research issue?’
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